Sunday, June 6, 2010

South Dakota Summer

This one came from a poetry workshop led by the poet laureate of Oregon, Lassen Inada. When I read this to the participants, he said, "Wow! Fantastic!"




The buttery white sand is totally smooth,
so soft it almost surprises
when it sticks to my summer brown skin,
tiny blonde hairs
sheltering tiny blonde grains.

The edge of the sandbox is tractor tire
black, and so hot, it leaves a red stain
under the dirty smudges that smear my legs.

In the sand, a green toy tractor
lies on its side, rust streaking the raised
metal warps of the tall back wheels,
the all-blue driver asleep at the wheel.

On the highway side of the house,
the fields, yellow and frothy with wheat,
stretch to a hazy horizon,
a breeze bustles through, musses, moves on,
and returns hissing.

In the deep shade of the boxelder windbreak,
a wide green John Deere lurks, ticking,
waiting the end of the noon hour,
and the overalled man to climb on again.

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Wow. Fantastic. Yup, there's an echo in here.
Damn, you are good.

sing4u said...

Not being the wordsmith you are, I, like Jan, run out of superlatives. There's that echo again.