Monday, April 26, 2010

Oregon Sun

I wonder who uses the sun
when it has been taken
from the soggy shelves
of Oregon skies.
Is it left on a plateau
somewhere in the recesses
of the stratosphere?
Maybe some unruly student
left it lying open,
face-down and dogeared
where it is of no use to anyone?
Or perhaps it is on hold
for someone else at the library,
more likely a population of elses,
waiting damply in the murk.

Note: our prompt today was to resurrect a poem and edit it. I've done that here, an old poem from an old notebook. Still not quite satisfied with it, but it will do for now.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

itz just due east a bit north just east of spokane, wa... we could use a little over here... that is a lovely bit of poem.. happy day 26!!! nightflight no 5

Unknown said...

I love the way you 'repurpose' words. Is repurpose a word or is it another made up one like source or issue? Elses. Love it.

Avni said...

I'm a sucker for implied metaphor. The sun as a book-- a poem after my heart!